作文一直是语文的重头戏,但这出戏在日常的语文教学中并不好上。尤其是从教之初的十余年,我的学生都是视野相对狭窄的农村孩子,如何进行作文教学曾深深地苦恼着我。转机在于我读一年级的儿子带给我的启发,孩子在阅读课文读本后写了首小诗:谁也没有看见过风/不用说我和你了/但树叶在空中飞舞的时候/你就知道风和树叶一起跳舞了//谁也没有看见过风/不用说我和你了/但地上的沙子飘扬的时候/你就知道风和沙子做游戏 Writing has always been the highlight of Chinese, but the play is not good at everyday language teaching. Especially from the beginning of teaching more than ten years, my students are relatively narrow field of vision of rural children, how to teach writing has deeply distressed me. The turning point is that I am inspired by the son of the first grade I read. The child wrote the poem after reading the textbook: No one had seen the wind / Needless to say I was with you / But when the leaves were flying in the air / you Knowing that the wind and the leaves dance together // Nobody has seen the wind / Needless to say I'm with you / But when the sand on the ground flutters / You know the wind and the sand make the game