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[作文指导] 题目精析:在这次训练中,要求选择几个动物(两个或两个以上),然后编一个关于这几个动物之间发生的童话故事。这“几个动物”,可以是同一类动物,也可以是不同类的。先说给别人听,再写下来。重点指导:1.选好动物。同学们知道的动物肯定很多:有自己亲眼所见的,有从报刊、书籍中读到的,还有在电影、电视中看到的;要选择几个你比较熟悉、了解较深,又给你留下深刻印象的动物来写。2.从动物的特点入手编故事。每种动物都有它的特点,如体态、毛色、行走、觅食、繁殖、脾性等;具体的,如:老虎的凶猛、羊的温顺、熊猫的笨拙、猴子的灵巧、老鼠的胆小、翠鸟的机灵……以几个动物的特点为切入点展开想像编故事。
[Composition Guide] Title Analysis: In this training, asked to select a few animals (two or more), and then compiled a series of these animals between the fairy tale. These “several animals” can be the same kind of animals, can also be different types. Let's talk to others and write down. Key guidance: 1. Choose a good animal. There are definitely many animals that the students know about: there are what they see and what they read from newspapers and periodicals and books, as well as movies and television shows; you should select a few of you who are familiar with, learn more, and give Write your impressed animal. 2. From the characteristics of animals to start the story. Each animal has its own characteristics, such as body shape, coat color, walking, foraging, reproduction, temperament; specific, such as: ferocious tiger, sheep meek, panda clumsy, smart monkey, mouse timid, King of witches ... ... The characteristics of several animals as the starting point to start imagining the story.