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主题积极、思想阳光、文风明朗,是我们选择发表这篇习作的理由。偶像纪璟初居然被发现是小偷!这对李小让而言,无异于晴天霹雳。但她坚定地选择了包容和宽恕。人性的善良与温厚,为作品洒上了和煦的阳光。但是,作品无疑是有很大缺憾的。作者希望以此表达对友谊、对宽容的讴歌,而作品中情节的推动,主人公性格的逻辑发展并不能完美地支持这一主题的表达。也正是因为小让和璟初的心路历程缺乏必要的交待,作品情节的进展就显得突兀了。这一作品结构上的漏洞正是初踏写作之路的人所不易避免的。这一漏洞难免让读者困惑:小让无原则的宽容是对友谊的最佳诠释吗?纵容与宽容的界限又在哪里?璟初的双面人格真的值得同情吗?体现生活某一截面的小说,更需要作者对素材的梳理整合。有时候一些伏笔的设置,就可以推动人物性格的清晰呈现,使得作品构思上更加完整。亲爱的读者,如果你是作者,你会如何安排,让情节流淌得更加自然,更加顺畅?
The theme of positive thinking, sunshine, and bright style are the reasons why we chose to publish this work. The idol Ji Yun was actually found to be a thief! This is for Li Xiaorang. But she firmly chose tolerance and forgiveness. The goodness and gentleness of human nature have brought harmony to the works. However, the works are undoubtedly very regrettable. The author hopes to express his praise for friendship and tolerance, and the promotion of plots in the works, the logic development of the character of the protagonist does not perfectly support the expression of this theme. It is precisely because of the lack of necessary confession of Xiao Lian and Yu Xin’s mental history. The progress of his works is abrupt. The flaw in the structure of this work is difficult to avoid for those who are new to writing. This loophole inevitably confuses readers: Is small tolerance to unprincipled tolerance the best interpretation of friendship? Where is the boundary between tolerance and tolerance? Is the early double-faced personality really worth sympathy? Novels also require the author’s combing and integration of materials. Sometimes, some foreshadowing settings can promote the clear presentation of characters and make the work more complete in concept. Dear reader, if you are an author, how would you arrange to make the plot more natural and smooth?