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读写任务的发表看法这部分要拿高分，一般来说，考生写得越长，分数相应就会越高。答卷中一般只空下一两行为宜。本文谈谈如何将文章恰当地写长写好。
一、如何拓展内容要点
1. 正反式。
如就谈诚信与人生的关系这个话题，可以利用正反式的逻辑组织材料：诚信对人生的重要性；没有诚信的人会怎样。
It’s obvious that an honest person will definitely win the respect from others，which is of great importance in our study and daily life，and even in the business world. However，a dishonest person will lose his fame and trust from others sooner or later. No matter how intelligent he is，dishonesty will ruin his future.
2. 递进式。
如谈论“儿童肥胖的不良影响”，可以从身体上进而从精神上谈论肥胖对儿童造成的不良影响。
As far as we know，obese children tend to eat a lot but they take little exercise， as a result of which they often fall ill easily. Besides，because of their appearance， they get less confidence in themselves，which leads to isolation and depression.
3. 列举式。
如谈论个人对网上购物的看法。可利用列举式分别谈其优点和缺点。
On one hand，online shopping has its advantages. Firstly，it is much cheaper. As far as I’m concerned，online stores offer lower prices to the customers and some don’t charge delivery fee if we buy more than one. Secondly，it is more convenient as customers needn’t walk store after store for what they like. And it’s easier for them to compare products online.
4. 相关式。
所谓相关式是指围绕决定事物的相关因素谈论问题的方法。如就“如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故，我们就可以围绕造成交通事故的相关因素如司机和行人来谈论如何避免。
What can we do to avoid traffic accidents？
（1） As to drivers: keep their emotions under control；respect others
（2） As to walkers/pedestrians and cyclists: strictly obey the traffic rules; value their own lives
二、如何写好经历感悟
凡是要求“以你或他人的经历说明……”的，这个要点一定要详写。要写长写好事例部分，可按照过渡、故事开头、发展、结尾、感悟五个步骤来写。以2011年广州一模要点（3）为例：以你或他人的经历说明诚信的重要性。
1. 过渡。
与Summary过渡的最经典的语句是：It reminds me one of my experience which happened several years ago.
2. 故事开头、发展、结尾。
就“诚信的重要性”可以举一个正面的素材，说明诚信给某人带来的好处；也可以举一个反面的例子，说明不讲诚信给人带来的危害。此处摘录两份优秀试卷看一下他们的记叙是怎样展开的。
正面素材的事例：
（总括）I used to hear of a story about a lucky taxi driver. He was a hard-working and kind-hearted man and everyone admired him for his honesty. （开头）Once he was surprised to find a big box that was left by some passenger in his car，in which there was 10 thousand yuan. （发展）Though his family was very poor，and he exactly needed a sum of money at that time for his sick mother in the hospital，without a second thought，he handed it to the police station at once.（结尾）The loser was so grateful that he gave him one thousand yuan in return.
反面素材的事例：
(总括)I have a friend who always cheats others. You can never get the true answers from his mouth. （开头）Once he borrowed my book but unexpectedly he lost it. （发展）Several days later，he told me that the book was returned to me a day before，saying that I must had forgotten. I didn’t receive my book at all! （结尾）Later，I knew the truth from his mother. It was at that moment that I began to stop making friends with him. Because of his dishonesty，he had fewer and fewer friends gradually.
3. 感悟
即使没有特别要求“谈谈你从中悟出的道理”，写一两句感悟也是点睛之笔。可使用感叹、倒装、强调、虚拟等句型。
（1）What an honest person he is!
（2）Not until then did he realize how important it is to be honest with others.
（3）It was his honesty/dishonesty that saved/ruined him.
（4）I am fully convinced that he would have been unlikely to become a great man but for his honesty.
而针对广州一模的最后一个要点特别要求“谈谈你从中悟出的道理”，那就至少要用两三行去具体谈了。怎样写？可用总结式总括所得教训，再用递进式，或正反式等分述。最后可再加上反问或号召力较强的句子强调收尾。
此外，在举事例时，为增添事例的生动性，有意识地多一些人物的心理活动的刻画描写，也是增添字数的好办法。如：
（1）So upset was I that I was unwilling to make an apology to him.
（2）Fortunately，with the help of him，I gradually realized the importance of being honest.
（3）Much to my delight，due to my honesty，one year later，I became one of the popular students in my class.
还有一些用于尾段发出号召的常用句型也是扩增字数的绝妙手法：
（1）It is high time that we became aware of the importance of being honest.
（2）Only by being honest can we win reputation and achieve our goals.
（3）So keep it in mind forever that we should always view honesty higher than any other things.
最后，上文提到的这些方法同学们在审题时最好在原试卷或稿纸上粗略地列一下提纲。根据要求确定好哪个要点要详写，哪个要点要略写。构思清晰才能有的放矢，条理清晰。简单地列一下要点一定会事半功倍。
(作者单位：开平市开侨中学)
责任编校蒋小青
一、如何拓展内容要点
1. 正反式。
如就谈诚信与人生的关系这个话题，可以利用正反式的逻辑组织材料：诚信对人生的重要性；没有诚信的人会怎样。
It’s obvious that an honest person will definitely win the respect from others，which is of great importance in our study and daily life，and even in the business world. However，a dishonest person will lose his fame and trust from others sooner or later. No matter how intelligent he is，dishonesty will ruin his future.
2. 递进式。
如谈论“儿童肥胖的不良影响”，可以从身体上进而从精神上谈论肥胖对儿童造成的不良影响。
As far as we know，obese children tend to eat a lot but they take little exercise， as a result of which they often fall ill easily. Besides，because of their appearance， they get less confidence in themselves，which leads to isolation and depression.
3. 列举式。
如谈论个人对网上购物的看法。可利用列举式分别谈其优点和缺点。
On one hand，online shopping has its advantages. Firstly，it is much cheaper. As far as I’m concerned，online stores offer lower prices to the customers and some don’t charge delivery fee if we buy more than one. Secondly，it is more convenient as customers needn’t walk store after store for what they like. And it’s easier for them to compare products online.
4. 相关式。
所谓相关式是指围绕决定事物的相关因素谈论问题的方法。如就“如何减少交通事故”的主题谈论人们应该如何避免交通事故，我们就可以围绕造成交通事故的相关因素如司机和行人来谈论如何避免。
What can we do to avoid traffic accidents？
（1） As to drivers: keep their emotions under control；respect others
（2） As to walkers/pedestrians and cyclists: strictly obey the traffic rules; value their own lives
二、如何写好经历感悟
凡是要求“以你或他人的经历说明……”的，这个要点一定要详写。要写长写好事例部分，可按照过渡、故事开头、发展、结尾、感悟五个步骤来写。以2011年广州一模要点（3）为例：以你或他人的经历说明诚信的重要性。
1. 过渡。
与Summary过渡的最经典的语句是：It reminds me one of my experience which happened several years ago.
2. 故事开头、发展、结尾。
就“诚信的重要性”可以举一个正面的素材，说明诚信给某人带来的好处；也可以举一个反面的例子，说明不讲诚信给人带来的危害。此处摘录两份优秀试卷看一下他们的记叙是怎样展开的。
正面素材的事例：
（总括）I used to hear of a story about a lucky taxi driver. He was a hard-working and kind-hearted man and everyone admired him for his honesty. （开头）Once he was surprised to find a big box that was left by some passenger in his car，in which there was 10 thousand yuan. （发展）Though his family was very poor，and he exactly needed a sum of money at that time for his sick mother in the hospital，without a second thought，he handed it to the police station at once.（结尾）The loser was so grateful that he gave him one thousand yuan in return.
反面素材的事例：
(总括)I have a friend who always cheats others. You can never get the true answers from his mouth. （开头）Once he borrowed my book but unexpectedly he lost it. （发展）Several days later，he told me that the book was returned to me a day before，saying that I must had forgotten. I didn’t receive my book at all! （结尾）Later，I knew the truth from his mother. It was at that moment that I began to stop making friends with him. Because of his dishonesty，he had fewer and fewer friends gradually.
3. 感悟
即使没有特别要求“谈谈你从中悟出的道理”，写一两句感悟也是点睛之笔。可使用感叹、倒装、强调、虚拟等句型。
（1）What an honest person he is!
（2）Not until then did he realize how important it is to be honest with others.
（3）It was his honesty/dishonesty that saved/ruined him.
（4）I am fully convinced that he would have been unlikely to become a great man but for his honesty.
而针对广州一模的最后一个要点特别要求“谈谈你从中悟出的道理”，那就至少要用两三行去具体谈了。怎样写？可用总结式总括所得教训，再用递进式，或正反式等分述。最后可再加上反问或号召力较强的句子强调收尾。
此外，在举事例时，为增添事例的生动性，有意识地多一些人物的心理活动的刻画描写，也是增添字数的好办法。如：
（1）So upset was I that I was unwilling to make an apology to him.
（2）Fortunately，with the help of him，I gradually realized the importance of being honest.
（3）Much to my delight，due to my honesty，one year later，I became one of the popular students in my class.
还有一些用于尾段发出号召的常用句型也是扩增字数的绝妙手法：
（1）It is high time that we became aware of the importance of being honest.
（2）Only by being honest can we win reputation and achieve our goals.
（3）So keep it in mind forever that we should always view honesty higher than any other things.
最后，上文提到的这些方法同学们在审题时最好在原试卷或稿纸上粗略地列一下提纲。根据要求确定好哪个要点要详写，哪个要点要略写。构思清晰才能有的放矢，条理清晰。简单地列一下要点一定会事半功倍。
(作者单位：开平市开侨中学)
责任编校蒋小青