一大早我就坐在办公桌前,对着桌上一摞作业生闷气:昨天给学生出了作文题《春天来了》,然后用了整整一节课的时间来进行写前指导,让他们从各个角度去写春天给人间带来的变化,说明春天的美丽。我觉得这个题目不算难,加上我的启发,这次的习作定然会不负我望。可没想到,翻开习作,看到的几乎都是一些口是心非的词语的罗列,丝毫不见春天的鲜活,读后让人索然无味。不仅作文 Early in the morning I was sitting at my desk, sulking over a stack of assignments on the desk: Yesterday I gave the students an essay question, “Spring is Coming,” and spent the whole of a class time teaching pre-writing, From all angles to write the changes brought about by the spring, indicating the beauty of spring. I think this topic is not difficult, with my inspiration, this exercise will certainly not betray my hope. I did not expect to open the exercise to see almost all the words are outspoken, but did not see the fresh spring, after reading people boring. Not only composition