【原文】对于一个在北平住惯的人……济南真得算个宝地。【分析】没到过济南的人,闭眼一想,它既然地处北中国,那里的冬天必定是大雪纷飞、天寒地冻。怎么让读者能对济南的冬天有个较深的印象呢?当然要抓最显著的特征。如果第一句就说:“济南的冬天是温晴的,济南真是个宝地。”好不好呢?与老舍现在的这个开头相比,不好,似乎太直,又似乎太性急了,不能引起读者的阅读兴趣。值得注意的是,作者有意地避免平铺直叙的开头法,而是巧妙地以朋友的姿态出现,采用 [Original] For a person who used to live in Peking...Jinan really counts as a treasure. [Analysis] People who have not been to Jinan have closed their eyes and thought that since it is located in North China, the winter there must be heavy snow and cold weather. How can the readers have a deeper impression of the winter in Jinan? Of course, the most prominent features should be grasped. If the first sentence says: “Jinan’s winter is Wenqing, Jinan is a treasure.” Is it good? Compared with Lao She’s current beginning, it seems to be too straight and seems too edgy to be caused. Reader’s interest in reading. It is worth noting that the author intentionally avoided the beginning of the straight-sweeping process, but subtly appeared as a friend.