辅导点拨作者观察细致,运用多个叠词生动地描写了婴儿的头发、脸蛋、眼睛和小手,重点写小手的力气大。写婴儿的表情时,作者写得有层次,段落条理清晰,表达井然有序。文章语言“童味”十足,读起来非常有趣!小米粒是我的表弟,他是个刚满三个月的婴儿。他的头发黄黄的,十分柔软。肥嘟嘟的小脸蛋非常光滑,一双小眼睛偶尔睁开看看我,似乎不认识,又似乎认识。他醒着的时候,肉嘟嘟的小手攥成拳手往小嘴巴里塞,只要我一握住他的小拳头,他就用力从我手中挣出来,那力气述真不小呢! Counseling point of the author careful observation, the use of multiple overlapping words vividly describes the baby’s hair, face, eyes and small hands, focusing on writing a small hand strength. Write a baby’s expression, the author wrote a hierarchy, paragraphs clear, orderly expression. Article language “child taste ” full, read very interesting! Millet is my cousin, he is a full three months baby. His hair is yellow, very soft. Fat toothed little face is very smooth, a pair of small eyes occasionally opened to see me, do not seem to know, but also seems to know. When he was awake, the beggar’s hand clutched into a boxer’s mouth, and as soon as I gripped his little fist, he struggled to earn it out of my hand.