此文从“诗”的角度赞美祖国山河,很有特点。但是,引用哪些诗,诗涉及哪些名山大川,要注意“必要而又充分”;根据题目,有一山一河就足矣。引用谁的诗,引用哪些诗,要注意“集中而有序”--选材时,不必堆砌。 This article praises the mountains and rivers of the motherland from the perspective of “poetry”, which is very characteristic. However, which poems are quoted, and which poems are involved in the famous mountains and rivers, we must pay attention to ”necessary and sufficient”; according to the title, there is a mountain and a river that are sufficient. Whose poems are quoted and which poems are quoted should be noted that “centralized and orderly” - when selecting materials, there is no need to pile up.