《人生不等式》这个只有四个角色的话剧,写得清新,真实,作者以女性的细腻笔触,深入到人物内心世界,显得很有特色。但是,我以为作者在第一幕对王志高的描写,却有一点失准之处。为了表现女主人叶子与丈夫王志高在思想、志趣上的差异和矛盾,剧中写了王志高如何津津有味地操持家务琐事,镏铢必较地去买贱价处理田螺,回到家来还在用弹簧秤称量刚买回的肉,过年贴福字,还要倒过来贴,以谐“福到了”之意……这些地方都是有效果的,有些也能体现人物的一定性格。但是,过多罗列则难免给人以生凑的感觉。再说,象王志高这样的大学毕业生,业务上相当优秀的医生,也算得是个“次”高级知识分子了,即便是写他的“俗”吧,似乎也应该有他更为特殊一些的表现方式, The life inequality, a drama with only four characters, is fresh and authentic. The author looks into the inner world of women with delicate brush strokes of women and is very distinctive. However, I think there is something wrong about the author’s description of Wang Zhigao in the first act. In order to show the differences and contradictions between the hostess’s leaves and her husband Wang Zhigao in their thoughts and interests, Wang Zigao wrote about how to manage domestic chores with indulgent taste. Weighing the spring balance just bought the meat, the Chinese New Year stickers blessing words, but also upside down to paste “harmony” meaning ... ... these places are effective, and some can reflect the character of certain characters. However, too much is inevitably give people the feeling of getting together. Besides, university graduates like Wang Zhigao and doctors who are quite good in business can also be counted as “second-class” high-ranking intellectuals. Even writing his “vulgar” seems to have something more special about him the way,