著名作家叶圣陶先生的《记金华的双龙洞》,堪称游记中的经典之作。在这篇文章中,作者运用质朴简洁的语言,描述了自己游览金华双龙洞的真切感受。尤其是仰卧小船穿越孔隙的一段,更是为众多读者所津津乐道,成为经典中的经典。作者按照自己游览的顺序进行写作,写作线索清晰鲜明,材料组织有条不紊,彰显出作者谋篇布局的高超艺术。细读文本我们不难发现,构建全文的除了游览顺序这一条明线之外,作者还以读者容易忽视的泉水为暗线,串联文本的写作素材。看似与双龙洞 Famous writer Ye Shengtao’s “Remember Jinhua Shuanglongdong”, called a travelogue in the classic. In this article, the author describes the true feelings of his visit to the Shuanglong Cave in Jinhua in plain language. In particular, a section of supine boat through the pores, but also for many readers relish, become a classic in the classics. The author writes according to the sequence of his tour, the writing clues are clear and clear, the material organization is methodical, which shows the superb art of author’s layout. It is not difficult for us to find out the details of the text. In addition to the explanation of the order of the tours, the author also uses the spring water that the readers can easily overlook as a hidden thread and concatenates textual writing material. Seemingly with Ssangyong Cave