同学们在描写人物外貌时,常犯的毛病之一就是“千人一面”。写同学,女生就是苹果似的脸、大大的眼睛、弯弯的眉毛……男生就是国字睑、炯炯有神的眼睛……这样的外貌描写既可用于张三也可用于李四,失去了外貌描写应有的作用。毛病之二是面面俱到、求全求齐。往往是,脸上的五官都写到,胡子头发全写齐,结果既浪费笔墨,又没能把人物写活。 One of the common mistakes that students make in describing the appearance of a character is “thousands of people”. To write classmates, the girl is an apple-like face, a big eye, a curved eyebrow... The boys are the Chinese characters and the eyes of the gods... This appearance description can be used for Zhang San and also for Li Si, losing his appearance. Describe what it should be. The second problem is all-embracing, seeking all the Qi Qi. Often, the facial features of the face are all written, and the beard hair is all written together. As a result, it is a waste of ink and brush, and it fails to write characters.