小张在县政府办公室工作不久,经过多日的精心准备,他十分客观地将年度政府工作总结完成后呈牛主任审定。有“一支笔”美誉的牛主任随便一看总结就一针见血地对小张说:“写总结要抓住‘主旋律’,特别要善于挖掘工作中的‘亮点’。”“‘全县GDP实现三十二亿元,较去年同期增长11%;与去年增长16%相比,增幅下降了5%。’这句话累赘,应去掉‘与去年增长 Shortly after he worked in the county government office, after many days of careful preparation, he presented the director of the cattle examination objectively after the conclusion of the annual government work. There are ”a pen “ reputation of the director of cattle casually look at the summary to Xiao Zhang said: ”write summary to seize the ’theme’, in particular, be good at digging ’highlights’ in the work. ’The county’s GDP reached 3.2 billion yuan, an increase of 11% over the same period of last year; an increase of 5% from the figure of 16% last year.’ This remark is cumbersome and should be removed from ’growth with last year