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此文提供了“运用现成材料,表现新的主旨”的经验。第一,改变原故事的矛盾。变两难矛盾为“同室操戈”的矛盾——“闹得关系十分紧张”;变献智慧为关注“建设和谐社会”——村长说“为了让你们兄弟今后能和睦相处,我决定再送给你们一头牛”。第二,增加新情节。村长的成年母牛是头天送过去;后来生了小牛犊——对“和睦相处”给以赞扬!此文还需要升格:将最后自然段删除;充实前面的内容——或彰显“和睦相处”,或彰显“奉献爱心”。记叙文标题宜实,可改为“分牛……”——省略号寓“生小牛犊”之意。
This article provides the experience of “using off-the-shelf materials to express new ideas”. First, change the contradiction of the original story. The paradox of becoming dilemma is the contradiction of “companionism”—“Troubled relations”; changing wisdom to focus on “building a harmonious society”—the village chief said, “In order to allow your brothers to get along in peace, I decided to give you another head. Cattle“. Second, add new plots. The village cow’s adult cow was sent on the first day; then the calf was born – praised for “harmoniousness”! This article also needs to be upgraded: to delete the last paragraph; to enrich the previous content – or to show “harmoniously” ”Or highlight “devotion of love.” The narrative title should be appropriate, but it could be changed to “Separate cattle...”—The ellipsis symbolizes the idea of “cow calf”.