一点说明:《首战告捷》首发于《天涯》杂志2001年第2期。它曾经得到一批著名学者和作家的热情赞扬。对它的重写好像是对极限的挑战。这种挑战让我对汉语和写作又有了许多新奇和细腻的体会。重写的《首战告捷》成了我解读自己这三年的重写之旅的范本。感谢《作家》杂志刊出这一重写版,再次肯定我对语言和写作的虔诚与狂热。在我看来,写作是一项需要“精益 A note: ”The first victory“ premiered in ”World“ magazine 2001 second period. It has received warm tribute from a group of famous scholars and writers. Rewriting it seems to be the ultimate challenge. This challenge has given me many new and delicate experiences in Chinese and writing. Rewriting the ”victory“ became my interpretation of my three years of rewriting journey of the model. Thanks to The Writer for publishing this rewrite edition, reaffirming my devotion and fanaticism towards language and writing. In my opinion, writing is a need ”lean