辅导点拨:小作者运用语言描写、动作描写突出父亲对“我”的爱,真实、感人。难能可贵的是,从文中可看出小作者不但学会了体会爱,还意识到要用自己的方式将爱给予父亲。爸爸对我的爱不常表露于言辞,有时是我胜利时欣慰的表情;有时是我想放弃时一个鼓励的眼神;抑或是我生病时周到细致的照顾……记得有一次,我因急性咽喉炎导致咳嗽、高烧、喉咙溃疡,吞咽时喉咙疼得厉害,任凭爸爸怎么哄我,我就是拒绝喝水、吃药。 Counseling tips: small writers use language description, action description highlighting the father of “I ” love, true and touching. It is commendable that we can see from the text that the young author not only learned to appreciate love, but also realized that he should give his love to his father in his own way. My dad’s love for me is not often expressed in rhetoric, and sometimes happy when I victorious expression; sometimes I want to give up an encouraging look; or when I was sick thoughtful and meticulous care ... ... I remember once, because of acute throat Inflammation causes cough, fever, sore throat, sore throat when swallowing, despite how my father coaxes me, I refuse to drink water and take medicine.