【设计理念】对小学生习作来说,写文,即写思想感情,写心。这是他们认识自己、提炼自己、升华自己的一种思想境界,也是认识生活、提炼生活、升华生活的一种文字实践。所以,指导学生习作,就是引领他们回归“生命”的原点,打开心灵的闸门,飘逸心灵的情思,喷涌心灵的泉水,喜现心灵的流淌,织就心灵的文章,创造心灵的奇迹。这样,倾听学生“心灵”的表白,我们就可以触摸到他们内在 【Design Concept】 For primary school students to write, that is, writing thoughts and feelings, writing heart. This is a kind of ideological realm in which they know themselves, refine themselves and sublimate themselves. They are also a written practice of understanding life, refining life, and subliming life. Therefore, directing students to work is to guide them back to the origin of “life”, opening the gates of the soul, elegant soul feelings, pouring the fountain of soul, like the heart flowing, weaving the soul of the article, to create a miracle of the soul. In this way, listening to the students “soul ” confession, we can touch their inner