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同学少年从您的教学实践来看,您觉得同学们作文中主要的问题是什么?很多同学的作文缺乏真情实感、语言贫乏、内容空洞,甚至于穿凿附会、生拉硬拽,读来令人感到枯燥无味,难以产生共鸣。叔本华曾经说过:“作品是心灵的精华,唯有发自心灵深处的作品才能获得桂冠。”把真实的情感,用文字准确地表述出来,就是一篇好文章。“岁有其物,物有其容,情以物迁,辞以情发。”刘勰在《文心雕龙》中的精辟论断告诉我们,世间万物令我们心生感动,文章便是这份感动情怀的自然抒发。
Students from your teaching practice point of view, do you think the students the main composition of the essay What is the problem? Many students’ essay lack of true feelings, language is poor, the content is empty, and even coveralls, pull hard to pull, read it is boring, Difficult to resonate. Schopenhauer once said: “The work is the essence of the soul, and only works from the depths of the soul can gain the crown.” “It is a good essay to accurately represent the real emotion in words. ”In the literary heart and the carving dragon," the incisive theory tells us that everything in the world has touched us in the heart, and the article is The touched feelings of nature express.