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在进行记叙文写作教学时,有些老师常常过分强调要完整地叙述事情的经过,要具备记叙文的“六要素”,而忽略了记叙文对于材料的情感要求。记叙文的基本要求是以情动人,目的是使人感动。要达到这一目的,主要并不是靠事件,而要靠附着在事件中的情感。老舍先生说过:“小说不是事件的重述,而是情感的记录。”这话对我们写作记叙文同样有启示意义。有不少作文看起来也是有头有尾,叙事完整,但就是清淡无味,不生动,不感人,关键的一点就是其中缺乏真挚的情感。把一次大扫除的
In the teaching of narrative writing, some teachers often over-emphasize the need to fully describe the course of events and have the “six elements” of narrative texts, while ignoring the emotional requirements of narrative texts. The basic requirement of the narrative is to move people, and the purpose is to move people. To achieve this goal, it does not depend on events, but on the emotions attached to the incident. Mr. Lao She said: “A novel is not a retelling of an event, but a record of emotion.” This is also instructive for us to write a narrative. There are quite a few essays that seem to have their head and tail, and the narrative is complete, but they are light, odorless, not vivid, and not touching. The key point is that they lack genuine feelings. Put a cleanup