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编者推荐:此文还须锦上添花:1将第二自然段修改为“‘春’尊重‘秋’”;第四自然段修改为“‘秋’也尊重‘春’”,并对其他自然段中涉及到“崇拜”“尊重”的文句作相应修改——回答“春天的浪漫和秋天的成熟”的辩证统一关系。2这是关系类话题作文,作文在解读其“关系”时,最好进一步指明其“辩证统一”的具体方面。3标题要改得实在一点,不重复话题的文字,不出现表“虚意”的词语。
Editor’s Recommendation: This article must be adorned with icing on the cake: 1 Modify the second paragraph of nature to read “’Spring’ respects ’Autumn’”; the fourth paragraph reads ’’Autumn’’ also respects ’’Spring’’, and in other natural paragraphs. The verses related to “admiration” and “respect” were revised accordingly - the dialectical unity of “spring romance and autumn maturity” was answered. 2 This is a compositional topic essay. When interpreting its “relationships”, the composition is better to further specify the specific aspects of its “dialectical unity”. 3 The headline should be changed to a real point. The text of the topic is not repeated, and the word “virtual intention” is not displayed.