我们在作文中描写一个静止的事物,要学会抓住事物的特征写具体。比如写钢笔,有的同学写“我的钢笔不长也不短,是不锈钢的。笔头很尖,里面装着墨水”,有的同学写“我的钢笔大约有十四厘米长,穿着黑色的外衣,笔帽是不锈钢的,上面刻着‘英雄’两个字。拧开笔帽,可以看到钢笔头的形 We describe in the composition a static thing, we must learn to grasp the characteristics of things to write specific. Some writers, for example, wrote that “my pen is not long or short and it is stainless steel.” It has a sharp tip with an ink inside. “Some of my classmates write” my pen is about 14cm long and wears a black coat , Cap is stainless steel, engraved with the word 'hero'. Unscrew the pen cap, you can see the shape of the pen head