范例欣赏痕迹江苏盐城中学路花雨那年,枯黄的落叶撤满大地……我和她踏上了放学的路,我们彼此分享着自己的快乐。当我提到我的水晶天鹅时,她的眼里透出羡慕的目光,我不由得自豪起来。水晶天鹅是一个亲戚送我的,晶莹透明,十分好看。水晶天鹅具有十分深刻的意义,亲戚希望我拥有如水晶般纯洁的心灵和天鹅般善良的性格。她开了口:“嗯,能不能把它带过来?我想看看……”我满心欢喜地答应了,因为她是我最好的朋友。 Sample appreciation traces Yancheng Middle School Road, Jiangsu rain that year, the yellow leaves withdrew to the earth ...... I and her set foot on the road to school, we share their happiness with each other. When I mentioned my Crystal Swan, her eyes revealed the envious eyes, I can not help but be proud. Crystal Swan is a relative to send me, crystal clear, very nice. Crystal Swan has a profound meaning, relatives hope I have a crystal-like soul and swan-like character. She opened her mouth: “Well, can I bring it over? I want to see ...” I happily agreed, because she was my best friend.