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翻开我们的一些报纸,要挑消息写作的毛病,首先表现在新闻要素的问题上。正如当年《解放日报》那篇文章所指出的:“这道理早就有人说过,凡动笔写写新闻的也都懂得一点,该不成问题的问题。然而,一到实际报道新闻的时候,却往往难能尽如人意,有时还距离很大。说到时间,就常常可以看到‘不久以前’、‘上旬’、‘日前’、‘同时’这类笼统的话头,有时甚至连这些‘大概’的日期都没有一个……说到地点,许多村庄、小据点,属于何县,居何方位,常常不加标明,有的虽然标了一下,但范围很大,在一连串的小地名下,注上一个‘以上均在某某解放区’之类,打开地图,不知从何查起,弄得人头昏眼花,望图兴叹。说到人名,往往有名无姓,有姓无名,有头衔无姓名,有姓名无略历……不知道有多少新闻通讯稿,就因为缺少五个‘W’的新闻要素,
To open some of our newspapers and to carry on the problems of message writing is first manifested in the issue of news elements. As the article in the “Liberation Daily” of the year pointed out: "It has been said for some time that everyone who writes or writes in writing also understands that this should not be a problem, but when it comes to the actual reporting of the news, When it comes to time, you can often see general terms like ’Not long ago’, ’Early days’,’ Some days ago ’,’ Simultaneous’ and sometimes even these ’probably ’No date ... Speaking of places, many villages, small strongholds, belong to what counties, where, often unmarked, and some though marked a bit, but a large range of small names in a series of names, Note on a ’liberated areas above all in a certain’ and the like, open the map, I do not know where to look up, which makes people dizzy, hope map disappointed. Speaking of names, often nameless surname, surname unknown, title no No name, no name, no history ...... Do not know how many news releases, because of the lack of five ’W’ news elements,