“小公猪无意中听到主人的一番谈话”这一过渡句,很有悬念——小公猪表现前后迥异,导致“小母猪感到自己受了委屈,一种锥心的痛让小母猪日渐消瘦”。小公猪让小母猪因“苦”得“福”——反入正出。当“厄运终于降临”时,作者运用讳笔“主人把小公猪拉出去”——坚贞者永生!标题里“猪”字迭用,蕴含赞许之情;其中的“情”字宜删除。 “The little boar accidentally heard the owner’s conversation ”This transitional sentence is very suspense - The boar performance was different before and after, resulting in“ the gilt feels he has been wronged, a kind of concentric Pain makes gilts increasingly thin.” The boar let the sow get “blessed” because of “bitter” - it is coming out. When “Doom finally arrives,” the author uses the sly pen “Master to pull the little boar out ” - the steadfast eternal life! The title “pig ” word overlap, contains praise; and The word “love” should be deleted.