写作是儿童心灵的对话,情感的宣泄,自由的写真。教师在批阅学生习作时,本该看到富有个性、朝气蓬勃、色彩缤纷的文字,然而遗憾的是,在学生作文中常常看不到一个个鲜活的个体,听不到动人心弦的旋律,呈现在眼前的都是一个个的“克隆人”。著名作家余秋雨说过:“作文训练,说到底,是生命与生命之间表达和沟通的训练。”小学作文是每一个学生生命个体的自主行为,这决定作文教学天经地义是个性化的。一篇作文的个性,主要在于作者独特的感受、情感 Writing is a dialogue of children’s hearts, emotional catharsis, free photo. While reviewing students’ assignments, teachers should have read personalized, energetic and colorful texts. Unfortunately, students often can not see one live individual in their composition and can not hear the touching melody. In front of one by one “clone people ”. Yu Qiuyu, a famous writer, said: “Essay training is, after all, a training of expression and communication between life and life.” "Composition in primary school is an autonomous act of individual student life, which determines that composition teaching is personal and personal. The personality of an essay lies mainly in the author’s unique feelings and emotions