《归途》(原稿)这篇文章选材有生活气息,笔端流露着真情实感。但作者在写作中过于讲究叙事的完整,结果导致详略失当,湮没了文章的重点。以时间、地点等为标题的作文,对文章的写作重点提出了明确的要求,即必须 The article “Homeward” (original) has a breath of life in the selection of the article, and the pen ends with a true feeling of truth. However, the author’s excessive emphasis on the narrative in his writing has led to ignorance and ignorance of the focus of the article. The composition with the title titled Time, Place, etc. puts forward a clear requirement for the writing of the article.