本文以细节刻画和巧妙的构思,使母爱这一古老的主题再一次焕发出炫目的光彩。第一,细节描写。文章先以“头发凌乱地贴在前额上”、“半张着嘴”、“盯着考场”这些细节来写母亲痴痴地守望。一个“贴”字写其流汗之多,而流汗如此之多,头发如此凌乱,还有“半张着嘴”这一定格的形 In this paper, the ancient theme of maternal love once again shines with dazzling brilliance through detailed description and clever ideas. First, the details of the description. The article first wrote about the details of the mother’s carelessness with the details of “hair messyly affixed to the forehead”, “half open mouth” and “staring at the examination room”. A “posted” word is written with sweating, sweating is so numerous, hair is so messy, and there is a “half-opened mouth” shape