评语:此幅东坡论书小草作品,清新典雅,饶有情趣。用笔精练瘦劲,时代气息浓郁。字里行间可看出作者有较好的传统底蕴,颇有孙过庭《书谱》与“二王”法帖之逸格。但细致推敲,仍有些字字法不够精准,通篇尚未能达到气贯通灵。建议作者深入传统,细究魏晋,祛除时风,方有大获。 Comment: This piece of Dongpo book grass works, fresh and elegant, full of fun. Slim thin with the pen, rich flavor of the times. The lines between the lines can be seen that the author has a better tradition, quite Sun Chanting “book” and “two kings” Fatez grid. However, careful scrutiny, there are still some words are not accurate enough, through the passage has not been able to achieve psychic. Suggest that the author go deep into the tradition, carefully study the Wei and Jin, get rid of the wind, a big gain.