我们常常说记叙文要有“凤头”和“豹尾”。许多老师反复强调:开头要点中心,结尾要总结中心,尤其是开头,要用修辞手法点中心,以展示文采,赢得阅卷老师的青睐。结果,中考阅卷老师看到超过一半的考生不分青红皂白地运用排比句或议论句开头,如:“初中生活,是我们人生中不可缺少的生活;初中生活,是我们五光十色的生活;初中生活,当然是酸甜苦辣咸的生活。下面我们来说一下酸甜苦辣咸的生活吧!”(《怀念酸甜苦辣咸的日子》)“有的人喜欢把人生比作一条路,有的人喜欢把人生比作一杯酒,有的人喜欢把人 We often say that the narrative should have ”crested“ and ”leopard tail“. Many teachers repeatedly emphasize: centering on the key points at the beginning, concluding the center at the end, especially at the beginning, using rhetorical techniques to center the center to showcase literary talent and win the favor of marking teachers. As a result, more than half of the test grade examiners saw more than half of the candidates indiscriminately use parallels or argumentative sentences, such as: ”Junior high school life is indispensable in our life life; junior high school life is our colorful life; junior high school life , Of course, is the bitter and sour salty life. Now let's talk about the sweet and sour salty life! “(” Remember the sour, sweet and sour salty days “)” Some people like to compare life as a way, and some people like to life ratio For a glass of wine, some people like to put people