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高中语文课文第五册新选进的《痛惜之余的愿望》一文,思想性很强,很有针对性,所提意见既尖锐又恳切,无论内容或写法都值得中学生学习。但是,作为教材范文,特别是讲读课文来说,我们不能不有点遗憾,它在语言规范化上是不够的,有好些地方读起来疙疙瘩痞,很不顺畅,甚至有明显的语病。其中以课本67页为最突出。试举例如下。一、“确实,除了在那个使我们大家都痛苦的时期以外,我们不能过多地责怪长春光机所和山微电子公司没有照顾好蒋筑英和罗健夫。但是痛定思
The article “Worrily Affords Desire” newly selected in the fifth volume of the Senior Chinese language text is very ideological and highly targeted. The comments made are both acute and earnest. No matter what the content or writing method is, it is worth learning by middle school students. However, as a model for teaching and research, especially for reading and reading texts, we cannot but feel sorry for it. It is not enough for language standardization. There are a lot of places that are not very smooth reading, and there are even obvious symptoms. Among them, 67 pages of textbooks are the most prominent. Examples are as follows. First, ”Indeed, we can’t blame the Changchun Opto-Electronics Company and Shan Microelectronics for not taking care of Jiang Jianying and Luo Jianfu, except for the period that has caused us all to suffer.