几个月来，收到不少函授学员的新闻摄影或艺术摄影作品。这些作品的共同特点是反映了基层的实际，生活气息较浓。但存在着明显的不足，主要表现在：一是不大讲究用光，要么聚焦不准，画面拍得模糊不清，要么曝光不当，画面或暗或白。二是不大讲究构图，画面或杂乱无章，或过于 In the past few months, we have received many photojournalism or art photography from correspondence students. The common feature of these works is that they reflect the reality at the grassroots level and their life style is thicker. But there are obvious deficiencies, mainly in: First, not pay attention to the use of light, or focus is not allowed, the picture is blurred, or not properly exposed, the picture is dark or white. Second, pay little attention to the composition, the picture or chaotic, or too