Dear Linda，
　　Long time no see！ I miss you very much.
　　I am taller and healthier now than I was two years ago. I spend less time playing the computer games. Most of the time， I read and study. It helps me to get better grades. I also made many new friends because I am more outgoing now than before.
　　I will live every day of my life with absolute passion. How about you？ Please reply to me as quickly as possible. Give me a visit if you are free.
　　Yours
　　Alice
　　彭小雙老师点评：这篇文章的主题是以书信的格式比较现在的自己和两年前的变化，重点练习比较状语从句。作者立意明确，从学习和交友两个方面来描述了自己的变化，书信格式也很工整。但老师认为还可以从课外生活这方面来补充描述，并利用更多复合句来补充句子的定状补成分，让句子更加丰盈。
　　范文：
　　Dear Linda，
　　Long time no see！ How is everything going with you？ I am very happy to share something about my new school life with you.
　　I am taller and healthier than I was two years ago. In order to get better grades， I spend less time playing computer games. Most of the time， I read books and write stories， which can make my life easier later. Of course， I also play sports three times a week after class， to improve the physical and mental health. What’s more， I have more friends now because I am more outgoing and more friendly than before.
　　I will live every day to the fullest and I really enjoy my school life. How about your？ If you are available， I hope we can play together this autumn.
　　I look forward to hearing from you.
　　Yours
　　Alice