记叙文是靠形象感染读者的。如果把笔墨分散,写得零散、拖沓,没有一个完整的画面和动人的形象,写不出一定的环境气氛,就不可能感人。因此,要特别注意写得集中。怎样才能写得集中呢?这里着重谈两个问题。一、要善于截取题材语文教师常常遇到这类情况:例如给学生出了个《春游北海》的作文题,有的学生从早晨起床写起,有的甚至从几天前得到春游的消息写起。教师批评说离题 Narrative texts infect readers by image. If the pen and ink are dispersed and written in a fragmented and protracted manner, there is no complete picture and moving image, and it is impossible to move without writing a certain atmosphere. Therefore, special attention must be paid to writing. How can we concentrate on writing? Here we focus on two issues. First, to be good at intercepting subjects Chinese teachers often encounter such situations: For example, students are given a essay entitled “The Spring in the North Sea”. Some students start to wake up in the morning and some even write a message from the spring tour a few days ago. From. The teacher criticized the digression