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每接一个班,教学生第一次习作,我都要让学生在作文本的首页上写上:像鸡一样地坚持;像牛一样地沉静;像鹰一样地向往。这也是我教给学生习作的三大信念。“只要坚持啼鸣,黑暗就会隐退,光明就会到来。”这是公鸡的信念。写作也得坚持观察,获取素材,坚持思考,记下当时的冲动,才会在写作时写得顺畅。我们校园有一棵紫荆树,它在操场的中间,占了一片地方。为什么建校者把树留下,有着一定的蕴意。这树是学生写作的冲动,但学生第一次观察它时却毫无收获。我引导学生再次观察和思考:紫荆树一年四季都站在操
Each time a class is taught, the first time a student teaches, I have to have the student write on the first page of the composition: the same as a chicken; quiet as a cow; a longing for an eagle. This is also the three major beliefs I teach students. “Just hold the crow, the darkness will retreat, the light will come. ” This is the cock’s faith. Writing has to insist on observation, access to materials, persist in thinking, write down the impulse at the time, will write smoothly in writing. There is a Bauhinia tree on our campus, which occupies a place in the middle of the playground. Why school-building who left the tree has a certain meaning. This tree is an impulse to student writing, but when the student observes it for the first time it gains nothing. I guide students to observe and think again: Bauhinia stood all year round