带梦寻诗黄海边,胸中块垒眼前山。我来恨不成天柱,撑起神州一角天。(2015.7《中华诗词》)宋彩霞点评:该诗可以用十六个字概括:“起的美丽,承的嵯峨,转的浩荡,结的响亮”。这诗能不好看吗?“黄海边”三字点明了此天柱山非安徽安庆潜山县西部的天柱山,而是山东枣庄市峄城区南偏东十五里的天柱山。该山虽小而秀,四周峭绝,嶙峋苍翠,平地崛起,卓立若笋,屹然独处,不与群峰为 With a dream to find poetry Yellow Sea, chest in front of block. I hate the sky, prop up the horn of heaven. (2015.7 “Chinese Poetry”) Song Caixia Comments: The poem can be summed up in sixteen words: “From the beauty, bearing the Saga, turning the mighty, the knot of loud ”. This poem can not look good? “Yellow Sea” is the word to clear the Tianzhu Mountain in Anhui Anqing Qianshan County, western Tianzhu Mountain, but Zaozhuang City, Shandong Province Tancheng District south of East fifteen miles Tianzhushan . Although the small and beautiful mountain, surrounded by steep, 嶙 峋 green, flat rise, Zhuoli if bamboo shoots, Yi Ran alone, not with the peaks