点评:九月有一个重要的节日,那就是教师节!这位同学以教师节为题材,创作了这幅作品。通过画面我们可以看到一位老师正在认真地批改作业,画面的细节描绘非常到位。墙上粘贴的标语,屋顶的吊灯,桌子上的书籍、文具以及一个冒着热气的水杯。通过这些细节刻画,我们可以知道这位小作者平时观察生活的细致入微。不足之处:小朋友的身体比例太小了,这点需要在创 Comments: There is an important festival in September, that is Teacher’s Day! This classmate created this painting with Teacher’s Day as its theme. Through the screen we can see a teacher is seriously correcting homework, the picture details are very well placed. Slogans pasted on the walls, chandeliers on the roofs, books on the table, stationery and a steaming glass. Described through these details, we can know that the little author usually observe the meticulous life. Shortcomings: the proportion of children’s body is too small, this need to create