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唐代的文学家韩愈很早就说过:“惟陈言之务去。”可惜,审视我们学生的写作现状,套话陈言随处可见,很多文章可谓是“怎一个空字了得”。如果把一篇800多字的文章中陈旧的、空洞的语言文字刨去的话,那么真正有价值的东西就往往所剩无几了。从这个层面上说,议论文写作训练最重要的目标之一就是摒弃陈言,张扬个性。那些有思想底色的个性化文章,往往在包括高考在内的各种考试中获得青睐,得到高分。笔者试以一次期中考试的年段高分作文为例,归纳出其中较为典型的三种类型,并力图剖析其中一些成功元素,供那些受着议论文写作困扰的学生参考借鉴。
Han Yu, a writer in the Tang Dynasty, said very early: “However, Chen Yan’s mission is to go.” Unfortunately, examining the status quo of our students’ writing, there are many articles that can be said to be “many empty words” . If the old, empty language of an article in more than 800 words is planed, then what is truly valuable is often lost. At this level, one of the most important goals in essay writing training is to abandon the statement and publicize individuality. Those who have the idea of personalized articles, often in various exams, including college entrance examination, get the favor, get high marks. The author attempts to take the high score essay of a middle school exam as an example to summarize three typical types and attempt to analyze some of the successful elements for those who suffer from essay writing for reference.