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这是三首写给女儿的诗,写作风格是相同的,在近于口语的叙述中,不动声色地、沉静地抒情让读者为之感动。女儿幼小的期待、稚嫩的担忧、简单的疑问,父亲痛心的歉疚、理解的沉默、谎言的善意,让我们感受到了人的真性情。一首好诗,源于真切的生命体验和作者准确而生动的表达。生活的细节在这几首诗中都有很好的体现,但它们又都是经过认真选择的。这种恰到好处的取舍,体现了一个优秀诗人的写作能力。鲜活的生命经验,准确的细节选择和有方向的情感表达构成了一首优秀诗歌的完成。诗歌的语言艺术是需要不断地磨练与淘洗的,它既需要生命情感,也需要匠人的手艺。
This is the first three poems written to her daughter. The style of writing is the same. In an almost oral narration, readers are moved by their quiet and quiet lyricism. The young child’s expectation, immature worry, simple question, his father’s guilty guilt, understanding of silence, lies of goodwill, let us feel the true nature of people. A good poem, from the real life experience and the author accurate and vivid expression. The details of life are well represented in these verses, but they are all carefully chosen. This just right choice, reflects the writing ability of a good poet. Fresh life experience, accurate details of choice and direction of emotional expression constitute the completion of a good poetry. The language art of poetry needs to be constantly honed and panned. It requires the emotion of life as well as the craftsmanship of craftsmen.