《机械化对上海工人意味着什么?》一稿是在我国技术革新和技术革命运动已经轰轰烈烈地开展起来并出现了奇迹般的成就后写的。在这以前,我们已向国外读者报道了技术革新和技术革命运动的规模、声势,职工们在运动中的积极性和创造性等等,但是,当技术革新技术革命运动进一步深入以后,工厂到底有了什么变化,机械化到底给工人带来什么好处,机械化究竟意味着什么呢?这篇稿件以非常令人信服的事实,就上述问题作了清楚的回答。国外读者对我国的情况是不熟悉的,他们生活的环境、习惯都和我们不一样,因此在向他们作报道的时候,要力求通过形象生动的事实描述,给读者以具体的感受,这样才能使我们的报道易于为国外读者理解和接受。《机械化对上海工人意味着什么?》一稿,要反映的是整个上海的情况,但作者没有采取概念化的抽象叙述的方法,而是从三个不同类型的工厂和一个码头的变化落笔,生动地概括了整个上海的技术革新技术革命运动的成就。使人读来如同身历其境,好像到上海作了一次巡礼一样。作者善于选取典型的事实,一针见血地反映出问题的本质,如写联华带钢厂,只着重写它两点:一是写主要操作上的鲜明的变化,集中地反映了技术革新 “What does mechanization mean for workers in Shanghai?” A manuscript was written after the vigorous launching and miraculous achievements of our technological and technological revolution movements in our country. Prior to this, we have reported to overseas readers the scale and momentum of the technological revolution and the technological revolution movement, the enthusiasm and creativity of the workers in the movement, etc. However, when the technological revolution and revolutionary technological revolution further deepen, What changes and what benefits does mechanization bring to workers? What does it mean by mechanization? This manuscript clearly answers the above questions with very convincing facts. Foreign readers are not familiar with the situation in our country. Their living environment and habits are different from ours. Therefore, when reporting to them, we should try our best to describe vividly and vividly the readers’ specific feelings Make our report easy to understand and accept for foreign readers. “What does mechanization mean to Shanghai workers?” The first draft, to be reflected in Shanghai as a whole, did not take a conceptual, abstract narrative approach. Instead, it took a penny of change from three different types of factories and a marina Summed up the achievements of the entire Shanghai technological revolution and technological revolution movement. People read like experience, as if to Shanghai to make a tour the same. The author is good at selecting the typical facts, and shows the essence of the problem with great precision. For example, when writing Lianhua Steel Strip Steel Co., Ltd., it focuses only on two major points. First, it writes sharp changes in major operations and concentrates on technological innovations