隶书范大成《鄂州南楼》中堂黄思魁(福建):此作粗看质朴大气,有较强的视觉冲击力。然细观之,线条过于简单,横画和竖画的关系处理也缺少应有的推敲。要知道,线条是书法构成的基本单元,所以建议作者在线条的质感和丰富性方面多用心斟酌。另外,作品中大多字写得左高右低,有一顺风的感觉,如“旌”“旗”“楼”“万”等,影响整体的协调感。这也说明作者在大幅作品的经营能力上尚需进一步提高。 Official Fan Shicheng “Ezhou South House” Zhong Si Huang Si Kui (Fujian): This crude look simple rustic atmosphere, a strong visual impact. However, the micro-view, the lines are too simple, horizontal paintings and vertical paintings of the relationship between the lack of due consideration. You know, the line is the basic unit of calligraphy, it is recommended that the author in the texture and richness of the line more carefully. In addition, most of the works are written in the form of a left lower right and a lower right, with a downwind feeling, such as “Jing ” “Flag ” “Lou ” “Wan ” and so on, affecting the overall sense of coordination. This also shows that the author still needs further improvement in the management ability of large works.