“骨碌碌……”(先声夺人的好开头!)从山上滚下来一个刺球儿,原来是小刺猬。山上的小动物们都不愿跟它玩,它一个朋友也没有。这不,它想到山下找朋友玩呢!(一起笔,就抓住了读者的心。)正在树林中做游戏的小动物们吓得四处逃散。小伙伴们都怕小刺猬身上的尖刺儿,都不愿跟它玩,小刺猬看到这种情形,难过地流下了眼泪……(小伙伴的反应 “Gululuhe ...... ” (Audition of the beginning of a good start!) Rolling down a barbed ball children, turned out to be a small hedgehog. Little mountain animals do not want to play with it, it is a friend. It does not, it comes down to find friends play it! (With a pen, it caught the reader’s heart.) Animals are playing in the woods were scared to escape. Small partners are afraid of small hedgehog spiked children who are reluctant to play with it, the little hedgehog see this situation, sad tears ... ... (small partner’s response