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王维有《鸟鸣涧》一诗：“人闲桂花落，夜静春山空。月出惊山鸟，时鸣春涧中。”教学中，一女生提问：绝句忌用字重复，此诗２０个字却重用了“春”、“山”两次（春山、春涧与春山、山鸟），这算不算毛病？教师一听认为有理，鼓动学生修改。于是主意频出：将“山鸟”改为“飞
Wang Wei has a poem entitled “Birds and Birds”: “People spend their sweet osmanthus and fall quietly in the sky at night. When the moon is out of the mountain, it will spring in the spring.” In the teaching, a girl asks questions: The quatrains of the quatrains are repeated, this poem The 20 words reused “Spring” and “Mountain” twice (Spring Mountain, Chunyi Mountain, Spring Mountain, and Mountain Bird). Is this not a problem? The teacher thought it reasonable and encouraged the students to make changes. So the idea came out frequently: Change “Mountain Bird” to "Fly