一、“我这时突然感到一种异样的感觉,觉得他满身灰尘的后影,刹时高大了,而且愈走愈大,须仰视才见.”(初中语文三册鲁迅《一件小事》)上面复句中,第一个分句“感到……感觉”搭配不当,“感觉”当然是“感到”的,用语重复,应改为“产生(有)……感觉”好。或者去掉“一种异样的感觉,觉得”,直截说“我这时突然感到他满身灰尘的后影……。”我以为这种改法更好,不仅避免了“感到”与“感觉”的重复,而且还去掉了一个近义词“觉 First, “I suddenly felt a strange feeling at this time, and felt that he was covered in dust and shadows. He was tall and loud, and he had to look up to see.” (Three volumes of junior high school Lu Xun “a trivial matter” In the above compound sentence, the first clause “feeling...feeling” is improperly collocated. “Feeling” is, of course, “feeling”. If the phrase is repeated, it should be replaced by “producing (having)... feelings”. Or remove “a strange feeling, feel,” and say “I suddenly felt his dusty shadow....” I thought this reform was better, not only avoiding “feeling” and “feeling.” The repetition, but also removed a synonym "feel