《水塘风情》是我在上“观察与写作”的作文课时为学生写的一篇示范作文。我们是农村初级中学,学生也全是农村孩子,我要求学生调动平时的观察和记忆,将家乡的美生动地描绘出来,并力求做到情景交融。在我带头下水作文后,我发现学生们的作文比以前写得要生动多了,我觉得有时教师的示范比枯燥的课堂讲授要有效得多。 “Pool Style” is a model essay I wrote for students during my essay class on “Observation and Writing.” We are a rural junior middle school and our students are all rural children. I urge students to mobilize their usual observation and memory to vividly portray the beauty of their hometown and strive to achieve a blend of situations. After I took the lead in writing, I found that students ’compositions were much more vivid than before. I think sometimes teachers’ demonstrations are much more effective than boring classroom teaching.