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今天,批改到小悦的作文《我的梦想》,竟有五六百字,这个才上四年级的小姑娘让我很惊讶。她写到“我一直没有一个固定的梦想。我曾想像爸爸一样成为一名警察,也曾想当画家,当歌唱家,因为喜欢吃,也想过做卖蛋糕的服务生……”所以,当爸妈问她的梦想是什么的时候,她只是摇头,无奈地说:别问我,我不知道。随着年龄的增长,她因为一直找不到梦想而“很苦恼,很苦恼”。心路历程描写得一波三折。最后,她写到:“那天,打开周记本,看到邰老师的评
Today, correcting to the composition of the small Yue, ”My Dream“, as many as five or six hundred words, this was the fourth grade girl surprised me. She wrote: ”I have never had a fixed dream.I used to be like a father, a policeman, I wanted to be an artist, a singer, because I like to eat, So, when Mom and Dad asked her what her dream was, she just shook her head and reluctantly said: Do not ask me, I do not know. As she grew older, she was “distressed and distressed” because she could not find her dream. Psychological description of the twists and turns. Finally, she wrote: "That day, open the weekly notebook and see the teacher’s comment