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公文中多重搭配不当,是指存在两种或两种以上搭配不当的情形,因其语句大多比较复杂,故修改时须把握“主干枝叶逐层剖解,前后左右综合分析”的评改方法。本文精选不同情形的实例进行评改,例句中有其他毛病的,顺便指出。【例1】造成农村青年“通婚圈”缩小的成因,有青年和家长的思想原因,也有某些政策和管理上的客观原因。“造成……成因”中的“成因”即(事物)形成的原因,和“造成”语义重复。“‘通婚圈’缩小
Incorrect multiple with the document, refers to the presence of two or more with improper situation, because most of the sentences are more complex, it is necessary to modify the revision ”main branch and leaf anatomy layer by layer, before and after the comprehensive analysis “ method of evaluation. This selection of examples of different situations to review the case, there are other problems in the sentence, by the way pointed out. Example 1 The causes of the narrowing of rural youth and ”intermarriage circles“ are the ideological reasons for youth and parents, as well as some objective policy and management reasons. ”Cause Cause “ ”Cause “ ((things) the formation of the reason, and ”cause “ semantic duplication. ”’Marriage circle’ narrowed