以前写作文,只知道“叙事”就是叙事,“写人”就是写人,好像非把它们分清不可。结果,在写记叙文的时候,往往忽视了人物的性格,不注意人物之间的关系,以为只要把事情的过程写清楚就行了。前不久,我在家里跟妈妈顶了一次嘴,事后想一想,觉得挺有意思的,我就把它写了下来。谁知拿给贾俊兰老师一看,她却问我:“你为什么敢于和妈妈顶嘴?”我说:“因为妈妈一向都很宠爱我。”她又问:“那你又为什么觉得这次顶嘴的事值得一写呢?”我说:“通过这次顶嘴,再一次证明了妈妈的确很在乎我。”贾老师又说:“你再看看你这篇文章,过程倒是写得很清楚,可是你和妈妈之间的那种你所说的关系、感情,表现出来了吗?”通过贾老师的启发,我终于明白了:有些事情,它的意义并不在事情本身,而在于人物在这件事情中所表现出来的品质、性格和相 Previously written essay, only know that “narrative” is the narrative, “writers” is written, it seems not to distinguish them. As a result, when writing narratives, they often neglected the characters' personalities and did not pay attention to the relations among the characters, thinking that they should write clearly the process of things. Not long ago, I was at home with Mommy top mouth, think about it later, I found it very interesting, I wrote it down. Who knows to give a glance at the teacher Jia Junlan, she asked me: “Why do you dare to talk to my mother?” I said: “Because my mother has always been a favorite of me.” She asked: “Then why do you think this talkative Things worth writing? ”I said:“ Through this talk, once again proved that my mother really care about me. ”Jia teacher added:“ You look at your article, the process is written clearly, but What relationship and affection between you and your mom did you show? ”Inspired by Jia's teacher, I finally realized that there are some things that do not mean the thing itself but the person Things shown in the quality, character and phase