【原题呈现】首先确定要写谁,再想想他在哪些方面表现突出,然后选其中的一两个事例写下来。要写真事,讲真话。(苏教版五年级下册“习作5”)他,长得高高瘦瘦,打乒乓球特别厉害。他,就是刘铖。瞧,课间,他风一般蹿到乒乓球桌前,挥起了乒乓球拍。他的一招一势,都那么专注。每一个球都来势凶狠,令 [Original presentation] First determine who to write, and then think about where he was outstanding, and then choose one or two of them to write down. To write a story, tell the truth. (Jiangsu Education version of the fifth grade under the book “practice 5 ”) he looks tall and thin, playing table tennis is particularly powerful. He is Liu Xie. Look, during class, he winds up to the ping pong table and waved his ping-pong bat. His move, are so focused. Every ball is fierce, so