点评小作者能够围绕“那记忆中灿烂的星空”截取两幅画面:一幅是记忆中童年在乡下仰望星空的天真烂漫的画面,一幅是现实中在城市里枕着华灯入睡的无可奈何的画面。作者采用对比的方式将它们组合起来,引人深思。结尾通过呼告的方式深化主旨,含蓄表达了对城市中的夜晚灯火通明的不满,直击社会现实,真可谓“小事件,大思考”。 Comments small author can focus on “memory of the brilliant sky ” to intercept two pictures: a memory of childhood in the countryside look naive sky picture, a picture is the reality of the city in the pillow to sleep to helpless The picture The authors use a combination of the way they are combined, thought-provoking. The end of the way through the call to deepen the main purpose of subtle expression of the night city night lights dissatisfaction, the real social reality, really can be described as “small events, big thinking ”.