一、《硕果》是一本双干卧式盆景。两干同向右方横出,其顶梢又同向左拐回,从动势角度说是不错的。但由于右下之短干成S型,和上面长干交叉组成8字形,它们各自的顶梢又在同一层面上向左回拐,枝片形态近似,所以画面显得塞迫、繁复。建议将S型干从基部齐平截去(此处可适当雕凿),设? First, the “fruit” is a double dry horizontal bonsai. Two dry with the right side of the horizontal, the top and turn back with the left, from the perspective of the movement is not bad. However, due to the lower right of the short stem into a S-shaped, and above the long-stem cross-shaped composition of eight-shaped, their respective tip and the same level back to the left, the approximate shape of the branches, so the picture appears congestion, complicated. Proposed S-type stem cut off from the base (where appropriate carving), set?