写作第一美德:一通顺、明白、简洁1.妙语连珠。师:你们的文章写得太棒了,我一篇一篇地批阅、欣赏,情不自禁地摘录了一些很精彩的语句。让我们一起欣赏“妙语连珠”。(出示)只见他像陀螺一样在座位上不停地转着……嘴巴像蚊子一样不停地动着……就这样,“蚊子大本营”以“陀螺陈”为中心点,一圈一圈地扩散开来,我感觉自己被蚊子包围了,嗡嗡之声不绝于耳。师:你们肯定知道写的是谁!不要说,不要揭穿,给这个同学留点面子。你觉得哪句话写得尤其精 Writing the first virtue: a smooth, clear, simple 1. Winks. Teacher: Your essay has written very well. I read and appreciate it one by one, and I can not help but extract some wonderful statements. Let us enjoy “punchline ”. (Show) I saw him like a spinning top in the seat kept turning ... ... like a mouth kept moving mosquitoes ... ... So, “mosquito base ” to “gyro Chen ” as the center, Spread around in a circle, I feel surrounded by mosquitoes, buzzing voices. Teacher: You certainly know who is writing! Do not say, do not expose, leave a point for this classmate. Which sentence do you think is especially good?